While I'm on a roll, this is a new poster for Sunday Night at Scots, our evening service. We've recently moved the service from our church hall back into our church building, and are also trying to include a couple of more traditional elements in the service.
If it's not too late, and you don't want to ignore me (feel free), a couple of suggestions - though it's clearly top notch now.
1)the gap after 'Bible' could be reduced if 'on' started the second line. The first line could make up for the loss, if you like, by inserting a comma after 'service' or changing 'A' to 'Our'.
2) I'd shrink the header so that the left and right margins match the other text blocks. Rather than reducing point size, I'd probably replace 'every Sunday' with 'Sundays' or something.
Please note, while sticking my oar in unsolicited, I refrained from suggesting that it should be 'supper and a cuppa'. ;-)
Nice work though. I like the background particularly - I think it helps convey the feel you said the service is after.
Thanks Anthony. Both good pickups. Alas, the posters are already printed. However if we ever do some flyers (which is possible), I'll definitely take the suggestions on board.
If it's not too late, and you don't want to ignore me (feel free), a couple of suggestions - though it's clearly top notch now.
ReplyDelete1)the gap after 'Bible' could be reduced if 'on' started the second line. The first line could make up for the loss, if you like, by inserting a comma after 'service' or changing 'A' to 'Our'.
2) I'd shrink the header so that the left and right margins match the other text blocks. Rather than reducing point size, I'd probably replace 'every Sunday' with 'Sundays' or something.
Please note, while sticking my oar in unsolicited, I refrained from suggesting that it should be 'supper and a cuppa'. ;-)
Nice work though. I like the background particularly - I think it helps convey the feel you said the service is after.
Thanks Anthony. Both good pickups. Alas, the posters are already printed. However if we ever do some flyers (which is possible), I'll definitely take the suggestions on board.
ReplyDeleteLooks tops Andrew
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ReplyDeleteAndrew. I look after an evening service in Launceston.
ReplyDeleteTell me about yours? Do you preach the same sermon as in the morning (I don''t).
Do some go to morning and night services (some do with me).
Do you get any children along? (mine come, that's about it).
Does it function as a separate congregation with, for example, its own small groups (ours doesn't).
Is there a demographic you think you can attract?